Challenge Check-in

I'm choosing to write my challenge on the Graffiti wall on SW 34th St. I'm choosing this because all throughout the semester we stated that hip-hop involves self expression. We also said that hip-hop is very versatile. I believe that the Graffiti wall is exactly that. The wall is free to anyone, to write what they choose.

Counterargument

Although people will argue that Miley Cyrus's VMA performance is lewd or inappropriate, many people will argue that Miley achieved her goal of creating a memorable performance effectively. As a young, successful performer, Miley Cyrus knew exactly what was needed in order to have people turn heads. The intention of the performance was to not disturb her audience, but to keep the limelight. It is the performer's duty to entertain their audience, even if it was inappropriate, there are many other singers and artists who objectify and sexualize themselves. One example is Lady Gaga who dressed in a thong at the VMA's. It is common sense for people to understand that sex sells.

1) The purpose of evaluative writing is to critique something based off of certain standards. If I write an essay on something then the purpose of my essay is to critique my directed object to a certain set of standards and determine either yes it does meet the requirements or no it does not. 2)Criteria is important in an evaluative essay because there are many ways one can evaluate a certain object. If I, for example, analyzed that sprite is better than coke because of its color, another person may disagree and say that coke is better because it taste more delicious. So if the author can establish what they are arguing based off of specific criteria then they can convey their message much easier. 3)Rosen says that music is an outlet, especially for young people because from each generation people of the same age group all appreciated that kind of music because it was used as a way to relate to one another or express themselves. Adults who are not part of that generation though would cringe and get frustrated from the music because they cannot relate to it the same way as the younger generation can. I agree with it because my parents cringe to the type of music I listen to, and from what I can tell my grandparents aren't too fond of the music my parents listen to either. I love Escape (The Pina Colada Song) though.

Family

(A) My parent's greatest dream was to have their kids live a successful life. Some of the strongest memories I have is when my mom and dad sat me down at the dining table and told me to do practice book after practice book of work. I memorized my entire multiplication table both forward and backward around first grade. The way my parents had my life structured as a child greatly influenced who I am today. I look forward to becoming the best I can be, my parents shaped me into a person who should follow their dreams no matter what, even if there are setbacks.

(B) The biggest decision I made on my own was deciding to go to UF. My parents expected me to go to UCF without my saying. My decision was kind of impulsive in that I didn't know what I was putting myself into. I knew there was no way I could go back which is what I wanted. My mood was uncertain about the future, especially since I wasnt expecting to move out at all. All my life I said I would stay home. I chose this because I wanted to become a stronger, better person, and from this past month I felt like I grew a lot. However..I had mixed feelings...the entire time I was like this.. I didn't want to leave but I had to..

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Hip hop is fluid, it changes with time. I think hip hop is like an art. Many people have feelings and views/intentions that may not be out right expressed. So they can be filter through hip-hop, like creating music or singing even dancing. Hip hop is ubiquitous, I think that everyone can relate to expressing what they feel in relation to hip hop, it's about expression.

A place that I've chosen would be Plaza of the Americas, and Turlington. I get the feeling that these two places allows students and other people to say what they want and wish. It's a way for other students to connect on campus. Like hip-hop, these places allow students to voice their own opinions.  Build character, that's what it's about, becoming a better person. I feel as though if one can express themselves by some kind of means, they can move forward and grow.